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Renovation
Contributed by
Nazmythian
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Thursday, 14th February 2008 @ 05:30:42 PM in AEST
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Renovation
So, here we are
once again…
trying to act like lovers
behaving like we’re barely friends
and I know ~
I know, we can’t go on like this
though somewhere in the darkness
a memory exists
of our first kiss
or tender touch
that one we’d both been longing for
so much
that slipped away
fell into disarray
and the rubble cannot recreate the past
when the future always seems to come
too fast
and, here we are
once again…
trying to get over
all those “I remember whens”
and I know ~
I know, we can’t go on like this
but somewhere down the road
we’re likely going to reminisce
on that first kiss
or tender touch
the one we’d both been longing for
so much
that slipped away
fell into disarray
and the rubble could not recreate the past
when the future always seemed to come
so fast
yesterday is a memory
tomorrow is out of our hands
and life is just what happens
while God laughs at all our plans
and…
our first kiss
or awkward touch
that one we’d both been longing for
so much
that slipped away
fell into disarray
and while the rubble cannot recreate the past
it can be filled with memories
it can be filled with memories
it can be full of pleasant memories...
that last
~ Nazmythian ~
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Nazmythian
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2008-02-14 17:30:42] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Renovation
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Friday, 15th February 2008 @ 11:46:44 AM AEST (User
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while God laughs at all our plans
My favorite line.
Dear friend Nazzy, you have created a masterpiece of renovations.
Beautifull. I luv the way you think.
Awesome.
big huggs, smiles, renovations,
emy |
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Re: Renovation
(User Rating: 1 ) by Willofree on
Saturday, 16th February 2008 @ 04:14:56 AM AEST (User
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Naz,
I love the way you interrelate the past, present and future in this song...at least I read it as a song. The title is so well suited to this piece. It seems a clever way to deal with memories. Your versatility of talent never ceases to amaze me. Actually part way through I was more like singing then talking, a real tribute to your work, I think.
An exceptional work of artistry my friend
Will/Terry |
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Re: Renovation
(User Rating: 1 ) by LoveStruck_Hippie on
Tuesday, 4th March 2008 @ 12:16:38 PM AEST (User
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My Dear Sweet Nazzy,
I took me some time to revisit this piece and try and come up with an appropriate comment. As I have told you, this is a beautifully written well thought out piece.
The memories are beautiful from that first kiss to the birth of our daughter and many that have passed since then. My only hope, my dream ... is that we continue to create many more beautiful memories together. I have faith in you ... and I have faith in us.
I Love You
~Shannon |
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Re: Renovation
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Tuesday, 4th March 2008 @ 03:41:18 PM AEST (User
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Nazz,
I do not even know what to say here, words elude me.
This is tender and simply beautiful to the point I had tears in my eyes.......
May your memories float along with the two of you and carry you to even more soon to be wonderful memories a life time to go! WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
huge hugs
Michelle |
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Re: Renovation
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 12th March 2009 @ 07:21:33 AM AEST (User
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brilliant. just a fantastic work of art. it flowed better than almost anything I've ever read. wonderful.
-phil |
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