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A careless beach scene
Contributed by
harmony
on
Wednesday, 13th February 2008 @ 08:59:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
surreal
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The rubbing out of a donkeys eye
in the sea smelling air
A scene of such sharpness
and dulled colours
An eye for the elderly
in a literal way
Copyright ©
harmony
... [
2008-02-13 20:59:29] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: A careless beach scene
(User Rating: 1 ) by zenith66 on
Thursday, 14th February 2008 @ 05:33:10 AM AEST (User
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beautiful little piece here i really liked it, t was very vivid for such a short piece and i really liked the last 2 lines!!! well done keep it up!!
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