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Little Jewels
Contributed by
bethb88
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Wednesday, 13th February 2008 @ 08:54:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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The scene is set, thick sunshine
weighs down the buttercup reflected light.
Lambent little jewels playing on the
horizon.
Dancing just beyond reach,
but not beyond hope
Like seeing life through the heavy haze
of forest fires,
wishing that reality is dreams,
and dreams, are
reality.
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bethb88
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2008-02-13 20:54:54]
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Re: Little Jewels
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Thursday, 14th February 2008 @ 12:36:59 AM AEST
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Nice write.The opening two lines have such an impact
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Re: Little Jewels
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by LoveStruck_Hippie on
Tuesday, 19th February 2008 @ 08:15:49 AM AEST
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Very nice piece ...
I think these were my favorite lines
"wishing that reality is dreams,
and dreams, are
reality."
Peace
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