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On The Inside...
Contributed by
LovingWhispers
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Monday, 10th March 2003 @ 06:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I fall into your eyes like water to a pond,
I journey to the depths of you,and.......
Then so far beyond......that sometimes I am lost for days,
But I don't really mind........
If you need me,look inside yourself.....
It's me there,you will find.....
Someone who adores you and likes to make you smile
For when sweet words fall from your mouth.....
My breath,I hold for but a while.
Nearer to your soul.....I could never be,
Until such times when we're alone,and..........
You're deep inside of me.
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2003-03-10 18:40:00]
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Re: On The Inside...
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 10th March 2003 @ 06:51:39 PM AEST
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| this is lovely sharon, i feel this is one of your finest poems, ty for sharing:) hugs nessa |
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Re: On The Inside...
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by DreamWeaver on
Monday, 10th March 2003 @ 11:42:30 PM AEST
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| Aahhh ... this is truly lovely ... exactly how I feel too ... love the way you used the dots to emphasise the next bit. Wonderful poetry ... Jan ***** |
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Re: On The Inside...
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 15th March 2003 @ 05:03:13 PM AEST
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Wow I liked this truly remarkable and beautiful like all your poems. I don't know what to say! Excellent.
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