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You will think of me
Contributed by
Shattered_soul
on
Sunday, 10th February 2008 @ 07:00:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You will think of me
For a long time to come.
You will remember my kisses
And my soft sweet touches.
You will remember my scent,
My most adorable giggle.
But there will be a day
When I won’t cross your mind
And you will be rummaging through your memories
Your life in a box
And you will remember every little thing about me.
How much I truly cared for you,
How much I truly loved you.
And I won’t leave your mind.
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2008-02-10 19:00:09]
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Re: You will think of me
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by JohnYamrus on
Monday, 11th February 2008 @ 04:03:59 AM AEST
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| this actually isn't too bad. the ending is what made it work for me...although that "most adorable giggle" line made me want to throw up. unless, of course, it was a line from HER...if that's the case, then it should be in quotes to identify it as such. if it's not from her, i'd change the line. too weak. |
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Re: You will think of me
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 3rd March 2008 @ 09:27:55 AM AEST
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that's how i feel. my bf just broke up with me last night.
Ravyn |
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