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Outside Myself
Contributed by
InfinitePoet
on
Sunday, 10th February 2008 @ 01:08:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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" Outside Myself"
The fear is awake
again,
and it's aching
inside,
harsh reality
takes me
by surprise
and I'm
looking in
from the
outside,
Bare feet
wearing
pajama's
and it starts
pouring down
rain,
I'm freezing,
my clothes
are soaked,
and yet
in this spot
I remain,
Staring
into A
scene
that can
never be
lived again,
A scene
that shows
how my
life has
Adapted to
and
Accepted
unnecessary
Pain...
Carrying the
Earth
on my
shoulders
with no
way to
Sustain,
or
Obtain
a way to
remain sane...
Subconciously
suppressing
the
Destructive
and
Deceitful
games I
play
on my
own
Brain.......
poetry orig
by:
PepperMint 2/2008
Copyright ©
InfinitePoet
... [
2008-02-10 13:08:47]
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Re: Outside Myself
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by emystar on
Sunday, 10th February 2008 @ 01:53:13 PM AEST
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Very creative writing.
Incredibly written.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Outside Myself
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by Bleedthelove on
Wednesday, 13th February 2008 @ 05:49:44 AM AEST
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| Love the style. Love the whole thing actually. I've been living outside myself for a while now...it's tragic. |
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Re: Outside Myself
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 12th December 2008 @ 03:29:46 PM AEST
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"Carrying the
Earth
on my
shoulders
with no
way to
Sustain,"
This is my favorite part of the poem...Write more like this and you shall be successful... |
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Re: Outside Myself
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by Mando on
Thursday, 24th March 2011 @ 02:42:08 AM AEST
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| Outstanding write |
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