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dream recipe
Contributed by
riverofwords
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Monday, 10th March 2003 @ 05:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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across the room i saw you
our eyes met .something stirred within me
i know not what
you approached ,we talked
that night i dreamed
attraction came to me
whispered .in my ear
go easy ..just a little of me each time
then trust came and with strength .said
only a little of me at a time ...and time your trust will blossom..bit by bit
friendship approached warm and fuzzy with a smile
you can give as much of me as you want ..trust will show the way
along then came respect ..regal and serene
you can only give me if i am returned ..and then you can give a lot of me..but i will only be there when friendship and trust abound
respect then said with a smile ..,when attraction ,friendship,trust and me are in quantities enough that all are in harmony and balance ,then love will make itself known to you
until then dont rush ,be yourself , be you
remember love will come
i awoke ..feeling warm ,and glad
the dream recipe ..is real
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Re: dream recipe
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 01:00:17 AM AEST
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| "you can give as much of me as you want..trust will show the way".. good lines. well drawn poem. its a nice preparation of dream recipe.. Dear River, I saw your comment on " Lady of Light". thanks a lot.. Venkat |
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Re: dream recipe
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by LadyDama on
Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 05:05:58 AM AEST
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| i do believe you have conjured up the perfect "dream recipe"... visual and excellent in it's expression... blessings... |
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Re: dream recipe
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by ktbugg on
Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 06:01:43 PM AEST
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| awesome "dream recipe" i enjoyed reading that poem, nice write |
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Re: dream recipe
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by roisin on
Wednesday, 12th March 2003 @ 01:33:49 AM AEST
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lovely dream, great recipe, wonderful read..
ta
rosie |
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Re: dream recipe
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by FLTulip on
Thursday, 13th March 2003 @ 07:56:19 AM AEST
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| Very unique perspective. Great poem! |
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Re: dream recipe
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 18th March 2003 @ 09:05:56 AM AEST
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i think maybe you know just how love is... you are a true romantic and a great poet... this one was was amazing... keep writing!
~Crystal~ |
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Re: dream recipe
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 12:38:48 PM AEST
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| awww....*dream on* and write on too! i do so love your poetry, hugs always nessa |
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