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Woman
Contributed by
R-1
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Saturday, 9th February 2008 @ 09:37:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Look at you
through these holes
I see beauty
being a Woman
Your presence
more then meets my eyes
enters my mind
like a bomb going off....
DEV_A_STA_TION!!!
No need for introductions
in chemical reactions
time is not here
only space.... to be shared
You are an adventure
I am exploring
with my heart leading
the rest just follows
Beyond what is said
beyond what is seen
close to you
is what I feel!
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R-1
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2008-02-09 09:37:11]
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Re: Woman
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by shelby on
Saturday, 9th February 2008 @ 09:58:19 AM AEST
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a sweet write
Michelle |
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Re: Woman
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 9th February 2008 @ 11:06:03 AM AEST
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Oh dear me, this was wonderful. You have described in a perfectly poetic way,
the attraction we all feel when hit right between the ventricles! lol
This line ..
You are an adventure
I am exploring
Oh my!!! I mean, just DAMN!!! Now that is poetry, friend.
Pure and simple.
A lovely, lovely read :)
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Re: Woman
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by emystar on
Saturday, 9th February 2008 @ 12:33:06 PM AEST
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Beautifull writing.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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