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Maybe tomorrow
Contributed by
Phoenix2008
on
Saturday, 9th February 2008 @ 12:37:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Maybe tomorrow this world will relate.
Maybe tomorrow, I pray… Be my fate!
Alone… desperate, unstoppable fear…
I won’t be without you,
All I need is you near.
Maybe tomorrow we’ll wake up embracing.
Maybe tomorrow will see us not chasing…
An instant of serendipity, a burst of sudden reason!
We’ll begin our forever.
Our love for all seasons!
Maybe tomorrow, I’ll say it again…
There’ll be no more ridicule,
God would have spoken it away
We’ll be as the universe and elements created
A love-force majestic
Untouched by their hatred!
Copyright ©
Phoenix2008
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2008-02-09 00:37:57]
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Re: Maybe tomorrow
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 9th February 2008 @ 11:16:33 AM AEST
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A wonderful thought penned with a poetic flair. I see that it was
posted as love/romantic, but I feel there is a global message in
your words. Very wonderfully put. I ADORE the last line.
~Breezy |
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Re: Maybe tomorrow
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by SilverRain on
Monday, 11th February 2008 @ 04:28:54 PM AEST
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| Beautiful piece of hope and dreams and longing. 'God would have spoken it away' - powerful! |
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Re: Maybe tomorrow
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by Oceandreamer on
Wednesday, 27th February 2008 @ 08:09:32 AM AEST
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| A beautiful and powerful write....A magical touch and hopes of beautiful tomorrows.Well done.Thanks for sharing. |
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