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Dreamscape
Contributed by
shade
on
Thursday, 7th February 2008 @ 09:15:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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I draw dreams with sharpies so color me confident
Follow the haunted scripts
From the hollow thoughts I think
Dominant in my psyche slightly somber
So i keep them in a box of sin
Surrounded by ghastly ghouls
Who can't carry a tune
And various pools
Of blood
With various tools
They use
To add to my wounds
In a tattered cocoon
I spun
In the back of my room I sleep
Imagining moons and suns
And planets consumed by dust
All stories of all sorts
In one of them I fought god with a chalk sword
And drew a tie...
I'm trying to paint with an unbalanced pallet
But my savage talent
Is driving me to stab the canvas
Drawing blood
Perhaps I went to far with the brush
Maybe I offered to much
Naked and scarred from the touch
Infected
Pleagued by shortened breath sessions
Contagious; stay away it spreads like dead skin
This is my scenic view
Looking out the window to see the trees I grew
From seedlings I watered with tears I swallowed
To see them bloom
This is my ocean front property
Postured in front of my window watching
Waves of madness crash against my grains of sadness
This is my surrender
My dimension
Where I can bend things!
Self sculpted polished paradise
I call it sacrifice
Gave reality back and reinvented black and white
My inventors paradigm
Where I sit solemn
Grip modern art concepts
My brush drips solace
Fly comets like kites
Conquer the sky's conduct
A world of pens pencils and markers
Potential and stardust
Where I control the essentials I thought up
You see, it's what I just most wanted
Nothing but my brush strokes content
From my unspoke conscious
I don't really have dreams
I don't have dreams-
I draw them
Copyright ©
shade
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2008-02-07 09:15:36]
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Re: Dreamscape
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by safetyinnumbers on
Monday, 12th May 2008 @ 12:57:03 AM AEST
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I thought this was a really good write....I used to draw and paint and can relate to it in that way. For me, creativity is about fulfilling a need inside.....something that needs to be expressed. And you expressed that well in this poem. Good work. |
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Re: Dreamscape
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by spend782 on
Tuesday, 13th May 2008 @ 07:02:00 AM AEST
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lol well the more i read it the more I thought it was defintiely in the right category
I really liked it really creative and out there keep writing! |
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Re: Dreamscape
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by Catalina on
Sunday, 21st September 2008 @ 10:22:26 AM AEST
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| I enjoyed this greatly. i loved the wording you used! thanx for sharing with us. |
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