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suicidal
Contributed by
ap
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Monday, 10th March 2003 @ 03:40:00 PM in AEST
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“Suicidal”
Imagination gone berserk,
dismantled and distorted all confidence.
Merging realm and dream-work,
recollections all blur.
Actions and reactions,
strangely occur,
without logical sense
and control over these occurrences.
Thoughts and feelings
flow over uncharted regions.
On my soul, treasonous intentions
commit blasphemous dealing.
Life is a prison
and death a sought escape.
Living in oblivion
is worse than dying in vain.
AP.
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ap
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2003-03-10 15:40:00]
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Re: suicidal
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by LadyDama on
Monday, 10th March 2003 @ 04:05:47 PM AEST
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| i've known a few to pull that trigger... i wonder if these are the thoughts they had... i think i would rather have more thoughts than none at all... good poem... blessings... |
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Re: suicidal
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by Damien on
Monday, 10th March 2003 @ 06:10:46 PM AEST
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| That's a very good write-Damien |
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Re: suicidal
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by TenorTaylor09 on
Friday, 14th March 2003 @ 09:51:19 AM AEST
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| I really like it.It sounds like it came from you.I`m guessing you`ve had these thoughts or a loved one has.Great poem. |
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Re: suicidal
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by AngryPrincess on
Sunday, 16th March 2003 @ 01:36:27 PM AEST
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wow AP, ive been there...sends chills up my spine...great write...sad content...
Lindsey |
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