|
Menu
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
Spring
Contributed by
Notre
on
Thursday, 7th February 2008 @ 04:30:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
|
We do not have a name of a line between sky and could.
She does not try to give me a figure of a heart.
Everyone is waiting for spring to come.
Copyright ©
Notre
... [
2008-02-07 04:30:36] (Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment. That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Spring
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 6th March 2008 @ 10:57:32 AM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
This is lovely but it does not follow the 5,7,5 rule of haiku writing. But its still nice! |
|
|
|