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A few Words Spoken (Consummatum est )
Contributed by
UnknownLegend
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Wednesday, 6th February 2008 @ 03:29:13 PM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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A few words spoken ... leads to dreams exchanged
questions near answered ......a hope soon does arrange
Interest soon peaks and fears grow abound
thought all is settled .........til differences are found.
Things that will keep... those elusive dreams at bay.
things that will chase...... all hope that's left, away
All questions finally answered ...... now there is no doubt
differences i think, is what this life's about
Dreams can be realized .... when two people care
sweet words now spoken ...... won't ever lead nowhere.
Last thoughts exchanged ..... the difference is too bad
last words spoken ....."why do I feel so sad"
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2008-02-06 15:29:13] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: A few Words Spoken (Consummatum est )
(User Rating: 1 ) by SilverRain on
Wednesday, 6th February 2008 @ 03:49:57 PM AEST (User
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Hope lost. Lovely read. |
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Re: A few Words Spoken (Consummatum est )
(User Rating: 1 ) by brew on
Thursday, 7th February 2008 @ 06:41:49 AM AEST (User
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Well, that my friend, I can not answer....Hm
Sad write, but the words told so much. Beautifully, penned, tho. Try smiling, maybe that will help!!!:D
brew~ |
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