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Faded Colours
Contributed by
puppy_dog_eyes
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Wednesday, 6th February 2008 @ 02:48:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Snow blasts cold across the open crevasse that is my heart
Laid barren wasteland all that was once invigorated by the dew of untainted bond
Dwelling now on the open plains of exposed vulnerability
No shelter, withering form that was once pristine
Cloaked, choked in the smog filled tunnel of despair
Every direction blind, nails scrape unscalable walls of uncertainty
The future is a shroud, wrapped tight around my face
Unable to focus through the misty and blurred.
Society clasps my hands behind my back, forces the facade
One face Jekyll, one face Hyde, for public and private times
You see the swan, serene, untroubled, countenance of calm
Masquerading thrashing in the whirlpool underneath
Who will repaint my canvas, daub new hues on my world?
The brush in my hand is useless, it now shades only grey
My picture dim, weary watercolours blend into the nothingness
Where is the artist who has the skill, to renew my faded colours ?
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Re: Faded Colours
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by scroggins on
Wednesday, 6th February 2008 @ 02:56:21 AM AEST
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| well done canvas. |
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Re: Faded Colours
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by conorshawn on
Wednesday, 6th February 2008 @ 06:51:34 AM AEST
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| we have all been here at one point in time if not we can not say that we have had the experience. good write |
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Re: Faded Colours
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 6th February 2008 @ 09:39:18 AM AEST
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I paint this write a big ole red as it's my favorite colour.
Also I dub it a masterpeice that's deep, open, powerfull and a write that most of us can relate too.
Awesome, friend.
big ole huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Faded Colours
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by KatsMeow on
Saturday, 16th February 2008 @ 12:40:55 PM AEST
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Fate will repaint your canvas, and the artist within will eventually reemerge.
Wonderful poem! xxx |
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Re: Faded Colours
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by SilverRain on
Sunday, 2nd March 2008 @ 07:29:34 PM AEST
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| beautiful first paragraph vulnerable and exposed....beautiful way of expressing your hurt and emptyness. |
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Re: Faded Colours
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 8th April 2008 @ 01:32:48 PM AEST
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| The title is so intriquing...I loved this, especially the 3rd verse.... I can so identify with it... Jenni |
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