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You and I
Contributed by
R-1
on
Tuesday, 5th February 2008 @ 04:53:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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You and I
here again
floating in my pool of thoughts
deep as what I feel
I see your reflections
in tears that drop
those that don't, glisten
and ripple
to your flowing image
Deep down inside
my soul, that you touched
my mind is a cloud
above what is real
no space or time
that keeps us apart
just you and I
here again
Dreams may come true
yet still will be dreams
for I am a place
with good and evil
better and worse
dreaming of you....
makes me feel.... much better
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R-1
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2008-02-05 16:53:20]
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Re: You and I
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by texasw97 on
Friday, 8th February 2008 @ 12:27:45 AM AEST
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| That was a nice poem. I too feel the same way about a friend of mine. Thoughts of her make me feel better as well. Take care |
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Re: You and I
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by emystar on
Saturday, 9th February 2008 @ 12:40:05 PM AEST
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Very touching, deep write.
huggs,
emy
Oh and welcome to our poetry family here at ypdc. |
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