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Once upon a time we were together
Contributed by
Writing_The_Sun
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Tuesday, 5th February 2008 @ 04:17:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Screaming everynight just to hear my voice
Not knowing who i am or to make the right choice
This girl changed my heart it's black and all used up
She should of took my heart with her but only stole my love
I am going crazy I hear it every day
How could someone i love be someone that i hate
I know i'll make it through this, that i can rely
Cause you can only take so much pain before you start to die
L.A. McFarland 16 years old
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Re: Once upon a time we were together
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by scroggins on
Wednesday, 6th February 2008 @ 03:09:00 AM AEST
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| when you catch your mind in expectation,(victim), switch to acceptance of what is.(warrior). I'm glad to see you realize you won't die. It is no ones fault. Accept, accept, accept. It will get better. |
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Re: Once upon a time we were together
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by CAUGHTinAdream on
Wednesday, 5th March 2008 @ 11:12:20 AM AEST
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I really love the line
How could someone I love be someone that I hate
I can relate very much. |
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