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AS IS
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emystar
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Monday, 4th February 2008 @ 07:52:30 PM in AEST
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First
Glance
SultryRose's Signatures
Her soul been ripped to shreads
Every day of her sad life, a dread.
You magnified hidden charms
On a moolite nite in your arms.
You found a broken soul
Took as is, Do ya know?
As is you looked deep inside
Walked with me, side by side.
Years rolled on, stayed friends.
Not much romance, no end.
She realized luv could shine
Even thru, bad, far behind.
You nick named her emy, it's true.
Encouraged her to write away blue.
You lite a candle in her heart
Always supported from your start.
Inside your soul she could see
How life should always be free.
A friendship that will never die.
As is, inside, he lite a candle to fly.
Copyright ©
emystar
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2008-02-04 19:52:30]
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Re: AS IS
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by TheGrimReapersHourglass on
Tuesday, 5th February 2008 @ 06:29:47 AM AEST
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| Great Poem:AS IS: knda like the-Nirvana Unpluged-video as he lit the candle segment. -Hey Wait I Got A New Complaint-Comment From The Grim Reaper,DevilsPriest KnownAs LORD,Denver L. Jr. |
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Re: AS IS
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 8th February 2008 @ 10:39:58 PM AEST
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| wonderful write as always. may they long continue, You are a star, Eddy |
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Re: AS IS
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 14th February 2008 @ 11:27:25 AM AEST
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| This is a really beautiful poem. i really enjoyed it! |
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Re: AS IS
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by unknown_utopia on
Friday, 15th February 2008 @ 12:31:51 PM AEST
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like the way this flows
deep innervision.... |
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Re: AS IS
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 15th February 2008 @ 04:44:45 PM AEST
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A beautiful peice written for a musical heart
emy, a soothing feel i got from this, lovely
indeed, as always and only you can write
about your own little private world . . .
(((((emystar)))))))
Ben |
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Re: AS IS
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by little_genna on
Saturday, 16th February 2008 @ 05:05:40 PM AEST
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WOW emy. this is fantastic. ive been in such turmoil the last couple of weeks. but this just calmed me right now. i felt so peaceful reading it... would be nice to hear these words being sung to some really peaceful, mellow music...
thanks for sharing |
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Re: AS IS
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 18th February 2008 @ 03:46:20 AM AEST
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Oh emy, this is so darn
beautiful!!! I LOVE it!
I think this is my new favourite from you.
I adore the sentiments (who could not?) and
the beautiful candor with which you wrote.
Straight from your amazing heart!
Truly remarkable, hun ~
*hugs by the ton*
~Breezy
(who is always touched and moved by your pictures) |
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Re: AS IS
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by jerseysue on
Wednesday, 20th February 2008 @ 01:48:59 PM AEST
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| Beautifully written, as always. Thank you for sharing such a hearfelt and wonderful piece of prose. Sue x |
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Re: AS IS
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by zenith66 on
Wednesday, 20th February 2008 @ 03:36:55 PM AEST
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I agree, i could feel the emotion in this peice, helped by the perfectly suited music(reminds me of an rpg) lovley little write here, like it alot,
the last verse was great, the whole pece was just brilliant well done on this write, ttyl
zenih66 |
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Re: AS IS
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by Oceandreamer on
Wednesday, 27th February 2008 @ 08:38:47 AM AEST
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A masterpiece!
Raw and deep emotion.
Beautiful words.
Well done Emy!
~~Oceandreamer~~ |
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Re: AS IS
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by SilverRain on
Thursday, 28th February 2008 @ 07:25:37 PM AEST
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| Beautiful write. Very personal and intimate. Thanks for sharing part of your life with us. Great flow, soft and sentimental. Really lovely. Well done. |
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Re: AS IS
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Saturday, 1st March 2008 @ 11:36:56 AM AEST
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Captivating and charming from beginning to end.
Lovely dreamlike quality to it.
Steve |
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Re: AS IS
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by NoSaint on
Wednesday, 19th March 2008 @ 01:22:14 AM AEST
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As is ...we are all beautiful works of art...it is wonderful when we find someone who recognizes this and lifts us up
Shari |
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Re: AS IS
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by prabal77 on
Thursday, 20th March 2008 @ 08:01:04 PM AEST
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| lovely as ever....and very touchy...u r damn gr8888888888888888 |
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Re: AS IS
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by Voice of the Silent on
Monday, 24th March 2008 @ 10:09:01 AM AEST
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| Great poem i think maybe one of the best i've read |
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Re: AS IS
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by MajesticPoet on
Friday, 4th April 2008 @ 11:32:57 AM AEST
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Hmmm to put music to it. Maybe an Avenged Sevenfold type. .. None the less. Great write....
MaJ |
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Re: AS IS
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by eternalsunshine on
Monday, 16th June 2008 @ 09:58:09 AM AEST
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this was just beautiful, nice write, great flow of words...
thank you
love, peace and happiness to you... |
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Re: AS IS
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by wheels on
Monday, 23rd June 2008 @ 02:28:26 AM AEST
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Hello Emy,
It is quite touching. it brought a tear to my eye-honest. If only everyone could see beyond and hold friendship tru to heart… to see more than a moments passion
Your friendless one –Kevin - the lonely vagabond
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Re: AS IS
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 9th September 2008 @ 02:27:31 PM AEST
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this is truly special and beautiful emy girl, i love it:)
huggies n' love nessa
@->>->- |
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Re: AS IS
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by Balmain_Tiger on
Wednesday, 3rd December 2008 @ 06:49:39 AM AEST
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| the love in your heart is very clear..... |
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Re: AS IS
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by iloveedwardcullen on
Wednesday, 10th December 2008 @ 06:09:06 PM AEST
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This is indeed a very nice write.
you have some real talent.
:) |
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