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POTTY TRAININ
Contributed by
emystar
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Monday, 4th February 2008 @ 03:34:35 PM in AEST
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SultryRose's Signatures
Money all he could eva see.
Oh God, settin my soul free.
Money's nice to pay bills
Sold his own soul, Not my will.
Johnny said, "He'll be back"
Hell no, I cried
Don't want him back!
I'm tired of potty trainin men.
Oh yeah, Potty trainin, men.
Now I can look inside myself.
Life ain't all 'bout wealth.
God him sefl takes care of me.
Don't even have to ask, see?
He took his money-n-moved on.
Evil will not beget luvs song.
Critasize all ya really won't.
Your memory no longer haunts.
No never again sale out luv.
Pretendin will push in shove.
You proved no luv in yo heart.
Take all your money, depart!
Copyright ©
emystar
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Re: POTTY TRAININ
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by shelby on
Monday, 4th February 2008 @ 04:11:03 PM AEST
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LOL amen to that sista . I loved this. Oh how true it is darn money and men . Nicely done my friend.
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Re: POTTY TRAININ
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by spooky on
Monday, 4th February 2008 @ 05:54:33 PM AEST
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they say that money is the root of all evil,,,
but their wrong, people are they abuse it and others for their satitifaction ,,
well written,,
a friend in words ,,spooky |
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Re: POTTY TRAININ
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Wednesday, 6th February 2008 @ 02:55:09 AM AEST
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Once again your poetry has been used as the perfect vehicle to express your emotions.
Money never is the answer to all problems.......all too often is it the cause of new ones.
Well written
Steve |
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Re: POTTY TRAININ
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by tifrob on
Tuesday, 1st April 2008 @ 05:37:36 PM AEST
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Emy, I loved this. It wasn't what I expected but you said a mouthful with this one poem.
~Me~
(a.k.a. J~) |
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Re: POTTY TRAININ
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 5th June 2008 @ 04:48:06 AM AEST
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| True, Men are nothing but whiny babies. Great poem |
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Re: POTTY TRAININ
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by gmcse8 on
Thursday, 11th December 2008 @ 09:07:52 AM AEST
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I know at the time you wrote this it was all very serious stuff, but I found myself laughing out loud at times when I read it. Not because it was paticularly funny, but because I heard comments like those from the stong women in my family when I was growing up. They all of course never thought we kids were listening, but sometimes when a couple of them would start talking, that is the very sort of attitude and language I heard. It was wonderful. I really liked the 2nd and 3rd stanzas. I think they are the best in the poem. The last two lines of the 3rd stanza seemed to stick with me too. I enjoyed this enormously.
Bob Jordan |
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