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My Eternity
Contributed by
suzy
on
Monday, 10th March 2003 @ 01:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I wrapped you in my sweet embrace
even if it was only for a little while
I outlined every last feature on your face
just so I could remember your smile
When I close my eyes your in my arms again
even tho when I open them your not
These tears are of happiness not pain
caused only by the joy you brought
I love you and everything you gave me
even tho you are not mine to have forever
Thank you for showing me a small piece of eternity
to leave is something I wanted to do never
I'll never forget our time together
and the things that you taught me
I'll love you always and forever
My love, my life, my eternity.
Copyright ©
suzy
... [
2003-03-10 13:00:00]
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Re: My Eternity
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 10th March 2003 @ 04:14:38 PM AEST
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| Wow, Great write. This poem gives me a new perspective on someone I thought I would marry, who walked away from me. Thanks for sharing.... |
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Re: My Eternity
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by ktbugg on
Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 06:03:42 PM AEST
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| beautiful.... great write... it really deeply describes exactly what you're feeling, i like it a lot... |
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