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Where I need to b
Contributed by
SilverRain
on
Sunday, 3rd February 2008 @ 06:11:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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U take me places I have neva been before
“hold my hand”, u said,” and trust me”
And if we went on this journey of karmic connection, passion and mystery,
Engrossed in each others eyes and bodies and minds,
Spirits joining on levels we did not even know exists.
And I cling to your hand cause it scares me
And I try to hide behind u,
put my face in your neck to try and find my feet
cause I don’t understand
But u hold my face in ur hands and look into my soul,
Calming all I am with the smile I c in ur eyes.
U make me feel safe, accepted, loved.
This is where I need to be
This is where I want to be
In ur arms,
in ur eyes,
in ur heart,
in ur life.
Copyright ©
SilverRain
... [
2008-02-03 18:11:23]
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Re: Where I need to b
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by scroggins on
Monday, 4th February 2008 @ 02:26:13 AM AEST
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| Phonetics (texting) are handy, but you create a stigma with it. Warm, heartfelt read. |
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Re: Where I need to b
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by JohnYamrus on
Monday, 4th February 2008 @ 03:10:48 AM AEST
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the texting phrases are childish and annoying and ruin what is otherwise a relatively good poem.
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Re: Where I need to b
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by alibof10 on
Sunday, 23rd March 2008 @ 05:51:39 AM AEST
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| great poem man .. awesome |
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