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Time
Contributed by
SilverRain
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Sunday, 3rd February 2008 @ 06:08:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Your lips say so much more than just the words they speak
They make me feel u
They speak to my heart and whisper to my soul
Kiss my fears gently till they are no more
Ur lips speak of destiny,
fate and stars
Of past lives and futures,
the new and the old.
Then it touches mine and time stands still
As our mouths become one,
so do we
And all that matters is here and now.
Ur lips told me so.
Copyright ©
SilverRain
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2008-02-03 18:08:57]
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Re: Time
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by scroggins on
Monday, 4th February 2008 @ 02:30:30 AM AEST
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| well expressed, by ur lips. Serious writers shy from the stigma of phonetics. |
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Re: Time
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 4th February 2008 @ 03:24:01 AM AEST
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very good. =]
a single kiss can say so much.
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Re: Time
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by alibof10 on
Sunday, 23rd March 2008 @ 05:45:13 AM AEST
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| great poem man .. awesome! |
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Re: Time
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by ZiggyB on
Monday, 7th April 2008 @ 04:38:00 AM AEST
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| Here again, you're showing your depth. You are a true romantic. Great reading. |
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Re: Time
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by whome on
Monday, 7th April 2008 @ 06:12:31 AM AEST
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| I loved your poem. It is simple and straight from the heart. |
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