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free write
Contributed by
Apartment213
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Monday, 10th March 2003 @ 12:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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under ur breathe under ur eyes do you really care how far can i stick myself out before u really know now very far from when u eyed me on the shelf how come u didnt take me home i guess im not the right boy, im left wing to ur mind maybe we can mend out parts on whatever street u call ur's all day i sleep thinking about u all night ur name rings that familiar bell who will u choose remember me when u wished for happiness cos that boy is just a tag a long cheap trick i was anothers ghost before i was ur's so im a new day time soap how can u loose
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Re: free write
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by LadyDama on
Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 06:05:50 AM AEST
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| i hope tomorrow is a better day... find a girl who loves poetry... she'll love yours ::smile:: |
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Re: free write
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by riverofwords on
Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 06:14:15 AM AEST
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agrees woth lady damma ..a gril who wloves poetry like you write ..and boy ..watch out
peace be your journey
terry
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Re: free write
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by wolfflow on
Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 04:11:10 AM AEST
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| i agree with ladydama, have you read her poetry, you would'nt dare disagree with her, but hey i love your style and there are i know intelligent, interesting females out there who will react to it likewise |
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Re: free write
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by AngryPrincess on
Tuesday, 18th March 2003 @ 02:34:50 AM AEST
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wow, you have so much passion kenny....its great...keep free writing :O) i loved it
Lindsey |
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Re: free write
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by karoody on
Wednesday, 19th March 2003 @ 03:11:32 AM AEST
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| the lady is right. of course, who wouldn't appreciate your works? thanks for sharing. |
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