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Dear your man is tedious
Contributed by
harmony
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Sunday, 3rd February 2008 @ 07:57:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
surreal
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A woman for a bath of milk
the milk of silk
A man for iron
the dullest kind
I wouldn't mind
and not being unkind
If the man looked like a lion
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harmony
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2008-02-03 07:57:23]
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Re: Dear your man is tedious
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by Honey56 on
Sunday, 3rd February 2008 @ 11:14:44 AM AEST
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This made me smile..
I like it.... |
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Re: Dear your man is tedious
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by high_on_duct_tape on
Sunday, 3rd February 2008 @ 07:02:51 PM AEST
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| Nice. You play a bit much into the rhyme, instead of letting the rhyme play into the thought. Overall though, a generally good write. |
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