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If you died tomorrow
Contributed by
UnknownLegend
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Saturday, 2nd February 2008 @ 09:43:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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If you died tomorrow, would you really be missed
Would the world as we know it cease to exist
Would the earth on it's axis never more spin
Would there be no breeze just stillness of wind
Would the leaves from the trees in mourning to fall
Would the hustle and bustle of this world to stall
Would rain drops to fall as tears from the sky
Would the birds lose their wings, never to fly
Would the sun in it's glory, never more rise
Would the man in the moon, his face to hide
The fire to consume, your dust blows away
The earth where you trod will be your decay
Will you really be missed, the question to wonder
This you must think and this you must ponder
All you have left, is family and friends
Treat them as treasures, from now to the end.
Copyright ©
UnknownLegend
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2008-02-02 09:43:42]
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Re: If you died tomorrow
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by Honey56 on
Saturday, 2nd February 2008 @ 10:02:10 AM AEST
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I truly hope I would be missed, as always a very excellent write..
I always love your poems..
God Bless & Much Love My Friend In Poetry |
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Re: If you died tomorrow
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by shelby on
Saturday, 2nd February 2008 @ 10:02:45 AM AEST
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to answer the question I would be missed deeply by a small handful........ the rest no I would not be missed one second that is the truth........
I loved this write and its forth right nature and pure honesty. It flowed with a masterful touch as well.
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Re: If you died tomorrow
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by jerseysue on
Saturday, 2nd February 2008 @ 10:27:01 AM AEST
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If I died tomorrow would I be missed, not sure. But while I am in the land of the living , I make a determined effort to let everyone know I am around. ha ha
Wonderful poem, I liked it very much. The rhyming is superb. Sue x |
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Re: If you died tomorrow
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 11th May 2008 @ 01:57:27 PM AEST
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Oh..I definitely will be missed by my family and few treasured friends...Cuz I do cherish them and let them know it... Other than them....I won't be...
Thought provoking write...
Jenni |
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