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Just ***** Tell Me

Contributed by ml02 on Monday, 10th March 2003 @ 11:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

You look
So cute
When
You're sleepin'
And
Then you wake
And
You use to be
The one
I held
Now its not the same.

Fire
Burned out
But
I really
Don't know
Whats goin' on
And
We don't talk
And
I'm goin' crazy.

Boy
Do you want me
I think
I want you
Do you want to try
Or
Give up
Before it
Evens starts.

Cause
I don't want to waste my time
Get my hopes up
Live
My life
For ya
And have my heart broken
In the end.

See its weird
Usually
I'm the one
Who doesn't care
And breaks the heart
Of another
But
Now the situation
Changed
Roles
Reversed
And I can't stand it
Yes
Or no?

Let me get on
Livin'
My life
With or without ya
Ok
Just tell me
Now
Do you want me
Or not?

Copyright © ml02 ... [ 2003-03-10 11:00:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Just ***** Tell Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Kirby on Saturday, 5th April 2003 @ 07:57:04 PM AEST
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It's nice to hear a player want love and not wanting to get hurt! i loved this poem! Your a very good writer and tell what I want to hear exactly!

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