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Gypsy Rose
Contributed by
shelby
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Friday, 1st February 2008 @ 03:33:08 PM in AEST
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The rose that bloomed within the desert floor does not bloom there anymore.......
Tame the rose, no one can, she is a free floating rose.
Her roots not set in the desert sand and stone,
uplifted, unsettled she tends to be, drifting where the winds may take her
her spirit is always meant to be a bit free..........
No pot, no dirt not set in stone she sheds her petals whilst she roams.....
Beside the roadways seeds set free another rose for someone new to see.
A gypsy rose she tends to be the roads her open nursery.
Desert rose she once was yes but gypsy took over who would have guessed?
A double personality? no not she just untamed spirit wild and free.
to be continued..........
~MICHELLE~
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Re: Gypsy Rose
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by spooky on
Friday, 1st February 2008 @ 05:22:09 PM AEST
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that was beautiful,,thank you,,
a friend in words spooky |
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Re: Gypsy Rose
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by Honey56 on
Saturday, 2nd February 2008 @ 02:38:14 AM AEST
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I just love your writes, always beautiful and have to perfect image with it..
Excellent my friend..
P:S:Thank you for all your beautiful comments..I have never one on anyone poem where you were being mean..Good Person you are and a good Friend""
God Bless You & Your Always |
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Re: Gypsy Rose
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by NoSaint on
Saturday, 2nd February 2008 @ 04:26:18 AM AEST
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bravo
Shari |
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Re: Gypsy Rose
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by emystar on
Saturday, 2nd February 2008 @ 08:31:14 AM AEST
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gosh girl,
You've out did us all with this one. Can't wait for the rest.
Beautifull but I never knew this story before. Learn something new everyday if we pay attention.
a masterpeice of wisdom and beauty.
Huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Gypsy Rose
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 3rd February 2008 @ 06:45:30 PM AEST
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| WoW this was just like its author . beautiful absolutely beautiful. Eddy |
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Re: Gypsy Rose
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by farscape_prophet on
Monday, 3rd March 2008 @ 06:41:32 AM AEST
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| wow...beautiful just like the poet herself...resembles you in alot of ways. You did a wonderful job. |
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