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Adrift
Contributed by
Rakerman1999
on
Friday, 1st February 2008 @ 02:27:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I am lost
and all
alone
Adrift
on seas
of needing
With gaping wounds
to sail
and soul
I
cannot
stop
the bleeding
In brutal storms of tears
I'm tossed
My conscience
lashed
and torn
By wailing winds
which make me wish
That I
was never
born
L. Carling c2008
Copyright ©
Rakerman1999
... [
2008-02-01 14:27:01]
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Re: Adrift
(User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on
Friday, 1st February 2008 @ 03:04:40 PM AEST
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Oh hell Larry what the hell?? Why so sad?? mmmmmm does the desert rose slash gypsy rose need to send rose petals sailing at ya to cheer you up or what??????????
Hugs her king of roses......
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Re: Adrift
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by Spike on
Monday, 4th February 2008 @ 08:19:27 PM AEST
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Beautifully penned, Larry. Raw and picturesque. keep posting your pain, please.
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