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free
Contributed by
conorshawn
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Friday, 1st February 2008 @ 02:02:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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free
As sour as this lemon be
Charged and cut in pieces three
With salt and water I am free
Uncross me now, I will it be.
Let this lemon do it's task
It's cleansing power I do ask
As this lemon dries in air.
Free me from my dark despair.
Uncross! Uncross! I break his curse.
But let not my simple spell reverse.
I wish no ill, nor wish him pain
I wish only to be free again.
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conorshawn
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2008-02-01 14:02:27]
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Re: free
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by emystar on
Saturday, 2nd February 2008 @ 07:51:00 AM AEST
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Very powerfull, writing.
huggs, smiles, freedom,
emy |
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Re: free
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 3rd February 2008 @ 06:49:09 PM AEST
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| thanks to your comment I got to read this very interesting piece of poetry , and I liked it very much. Eddy |
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