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The Cancer Spread
Contributed by
djs
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Friday, 1st February 2008 @ 12:22:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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the cancer spread
and took her away
leaving me in silence
alone and afraid
with nothing to hold,
but our memories
i'm trying to be strong,
but it's not easy
for she was my strength
my life, my love
everything i wanted
a gift from above
i still feel her next to me
i still smell her perfume
i still expect her to be there,
when i walk into our room
but instead i find emptiness
just shadows and dust
i can't move forward
yet they say i must
watching the sunset
just isn't the same
the numbness consumed me
buried in pain
her laughter still echoes
within these lonely walls
clutching my phone
i wait for her call
but it never rings
and it never will
i loved her then
and i love her still
- djs 1/31/08
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Re: The Cancer Spread
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by emystar on
Friday, 1st February 2008 @ 01:19:26 PM AEST
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this is heart wrenching but beautifull.
I'm so sorry for you loss.
This strong luv between you two will live on in this immortal write.
god bless you and ease your pain.
big luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: The Cancer Spread
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by The_Young_Poet on
Friday, 1st February 2008 @ 02:27:13 PM AEST
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| Very sad but also a heartfelt poem. A good write. I'm sorry for your unfortunate loss. May you heal in time. |
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Re: The Cancer Spread
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by shelby on
Friday, 1st February 2008 @ 05:04:27 PM AEST
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This broke my heart, I am so sorry for your pain and loss. You expressed yourself with such poetic beauty in this write. May your heart be healed once more.
Michelle |
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