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The Other
Contributed by
shelby
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Friday, 1st February 2008 @ 09:30:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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So you make your life revolved
around being the “other woman”.
No real thought to the hurting
or the destruction in which you cause.
Is it all fun and games?
A moment of truth or dare.
Caught up with your own self
no heed to feelings of others spared.
Thus another fact in this,
is when others seem to know.
Choose to sit it out on the fence
watching paths as they curve to and fro.
How does one sleep at night,
with a secret so great to keep?
Showing no self respect
or care for another’s needs.
It is stated that the karma rule
comes into play each day.
There is a result of every reaction
in cruel and heartless games you play.
Lay it out on your bed of petals,
the fragrance isn’t so sweet.
Soon it will turn to a patch of thorns
sticking you right where need be.
Copyright ©
shelby
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2008-02-01 09:30:42]
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Re: The Other
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by Tweeky on
Friday, 1st February 2008 @ 09:49:39 AM AEST
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Deep ...angry ...sincere ..and very well written
take care,
claire
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Re: The Other
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 1st February 2008 @ 10:09:22 AM AEST
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whoa!! this is a firey ball of emotions here but right on.. I hate people like that too.. beautifully said my friend ..
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: The Other
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by emystar on
Friday, 1st February 2008 @ 12:52:03 PM AEST
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Girl, I'm dumbfound with this powerfull. awesome write.
I'm not proud to say but I've been on both ends back in my self abusive stages in life.
what's really beautifull when you realize it's not hitting you back anymore and one realizes that forgiveness of oneself is posiible.
Grate job, girl!
Write on and I'll be readin.
big ole huggs,
emy |
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Re: The Other
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by Rakerman1999 on
Friday, 1st February 2008 @ 02:43:17 PM AEST
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Dont hold back....tell us how you really feel :P
This is powerful with an "in your face " message . I see your pen still holds the fire ;)
Very well done
Roses
Larry |
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Re: The Other
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by jerseysue on
Saturday, 2nd February 2008 @ 10:46:46 AM AEST
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| Sensational, and yes these women are home wreckers. No thought for the poor wives and girlfriends. Ver well put. Sue x |
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