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Forever

Contributed by Amicus on Friday, 1st February 2008 @ 08:30:37 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I'm balanced between hate and fear
All the others wish I wasn't here
I burden I never wanted to place
A pothole in life's horrid race

I cant just sit here and wait for it to die
I cant just sit here and watch you cry
There has to be something i can say
Can I do anything to just get away

I'm forever by the hounded pleas
Forever tortured by sharp fee's
They scream and wish for pain
Something that I hope they'll never gain

I say it'll be like it was
I don't tell you of the tear on the floor
As you slowly turn away
And walk toward the door

I never seem to say
The pounding three words you repeat
(whispered) I love you
Saying them is no mere feat

I want to embrace you like I did before
I want to make you feel love
I want to make you happy again
The only way it seems, is to go above

Above or below, two simple words
Heaven or Hell, seems too near death
But I have to make that decision now
With this final last breath

Pain surging through me
Targeting this broken heart
Conflict makes the cracks grow wider
Trying desperately to hold together the parts

A hand appears out of the smoke
Smack it away, trusting no one
The hand urges forth towards the cracked love
The hand stretched forth, appears like a sun

The heat is unbearable
Melting together my love
The pain is intense
And hand brings me above

I wake and see what I've always wanted
Your hair, and a smiling face
I know of all the pain I'll take
I'd do anything just to wind up in this place
(whispered) With you

Copyright © Amicus ... [ 2008-02-01 08:30:37]
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Re: Forever (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 3rd February 2008 @ 08:44:30 AM AEST
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This is a great poem though I don't understand why you have to whisper in some parts but well done!

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