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Depth
Contributed by
STECKS
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Thursday, 31st January 2008 @ 03:18:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Falling down so hard,
Still trying to pick myself up,
Lost in a the dirt,
Figuring out,
Where I went wrong,
Then you get advice,
From a person,
Who wouldn't even follow there own,
They make you think,
and Think,
That maybe you should,
Give them a try,
With a tear in ya eye,
Ya wonder why,
Ya just letting ,
It pass you by.
Copyright ©
STECKS
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2008-01-31 15:18:31]
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Re: Depth
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by emystar on
Thursday, 31st January 2008 @ 03:39:21 PM AEST
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You're my kindda writer, short, wise, powerfull writing.
What I see is natural, raw, powerfull, awesome writer!
Welcome to our global family here at ypdc.
we need more writers like you that says it dirict to the point with healin leasson inside.
Huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Depth
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by Poetic_Punk on
Thursday, 31st January 2008 @ 11:04:17 PM AEST
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| good poem, keep up the great writin |
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Re: Depth
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by scroggins on
Saturday, 2nd February 2008 @ 02:37:25 AM AEST
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| To become a spiritual warrior will stop the falling down. Recognize your station, you are really not the clown. you should edit more closely. remember to accept the moment. scroggins |
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Re: Depth
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by redsleeve on
Saturday, 13th September 2008 @ 07:06:39 AM AEST
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| great post. |
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