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trying to unwined
Contributed by
Voice of the Silent
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Thursday, 31st January 2008 @ 09:44:24 AM in AEST
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I sit here trying to pass the time
trying to just unwined
trying to clear the past from my mind
because it's all just a bad memory
These memories are driving me to insanity
I sit here trying to clear my mind
thinking "dam this is going to take some time"
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2008-01-31 09:44:24]
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Re: trying to unwined
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by Honey56 on
Thursday, 31st January 2008 @ 12:01:23 PM AEST
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Kinda funny, very nice write...
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Re: trying to unwined
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by Poetic_Punk on
Thursday, 31st January 2008 @ 11:48:42 PM AEST
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| Congrats, this poem has won you the ownership of my 50th comment on a poem on this site :P, but in all seriousnes now great poem, it reminds me of sitting wide awake in bed trying to stop yourself from thinking so you can go to sleep, luckily i learnt to meditate years ago so i dont have that problem, its alot like counting sheep and counting sheep is something i use as part of my meditation sometimes and it really works, i can meditate myself to sleep sometimes. but anyway great poem really enjoyed it, keep up the good work |
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Re: trying to unwined
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by texasw97 on
Sunday, 10th February 2008 @ 02:48:56 AM AEST
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| I too have problems unwinding. I feel you on this piece |
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