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One Million Years from Today
Contributed by
Maccabeus
on
Thursday, 31st January 2008 @ 07:23:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
scifi
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This is dediated to Jenna, for a future with us in it.
For your aged image
We created the world,
Through our years.
And now we leave it,
Like we think you would,
Have wanted for us.
Now we leave this place,
Never to see home again,
As our first hearth fades.
This is how it ends,
Swallowed in our inferno,
but not in darkness.
And now we must leave,
The cradle for the last time,
That’s what you would want.
Copyright ©
Maccabeus
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2008-01-31 07:23:47]
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Re: One Million Years from Today
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by Forgotten_soul on
Thursday, 14th February 2008 @ 02:24:29 AM AEST
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| I like this, it is smooth, and means something. It's kinda deep for me, I don't think about things like that very often. Good write. |
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Re: One Million Years from Today
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by eeeitak on
Wednesday, 3rd September 2008 @ 11:46:47 AM AEST
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this is so cool,
i especially like the lines
"This is how it ends,
Swallowed in our inferno,
but not in darkness"
great write!!! :D
--Katie |
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Re: One Million Years from Today
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by BobStanley on
Friday, 20th February 2009 @ 08:19:43 PM AEST
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| I have no clue what you were watching. I think the punctuation is not correct in what you were trying to say....not sure. The first lines of the poem are too abstract. |
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