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Eerik
Contributed by
Contralogicus
on
Monday, 10th March 2003 @ 08:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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My thoughts flood me, I can barely write,
About one cold and tragic January night,
One year later I am still in disbelief,
One year later I am still seeking relief.
From the painful truth that is suicide,
In the darkest caves of sorrow I hide,
One year later I am still wondering why,
One year later I am still going to cry.
About the depressing loss of life,
And the unimaginable inner strife,
One year later I am still thinking deep,
One year later I am still feeling cheap.
When I think about the television’s glow,
Bathing him while his heart began to slow,
One year later I am still filled with anger,
One year later I am still feeling languor.
While imagining his very last breathe,
Before he was brought unto his death,
One year later I am still with regret,
One year later I am still in debt.
To him for all the beautiful memories,
That he left behind and I hope he sees,
One year later his light is not dim,
One year later I am still missing him.
Copyright ©
Contralogicus
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2003-03-10 08:30:00]
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Re: Eerik
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by gina on
Monday, 10th March 2003 @ 11:10:49 AM AEST
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awwwwww this is so sad and touchin , i could feel ur pain there, hope things get better 4 u ..sorry for ur loss
gr8 poem
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Re: Eerik
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by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 10th March 2003 @ 11:53:59 AM AEST
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| Your pain pours from your words... so very emotional.....Well done. :o) |
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Re: Eerik
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by Damien on
Monday, 10th March 2003 @ 06:48:47 PM AEST
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| That was very touching-Damien |
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Re: Eerik
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by blueheart on
Monday, 10th March 2003 @ 09:36:59 PM AEST
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| Truly a heart wrenching poem. |
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Re: Eerik
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 24th April 2003 @ 12:32:44 PM AEST
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| hey. i miss eerik too. i understand. he was my best friend since i was like in my mothers womb.
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Re: Eerik
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by Contralogicus on
Thursday, 24th April 2003 @ 01:20:29 PM AEST
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| Hello there, surprising finding someone who knew him, what is your name? |
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Re: Eerik
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by Zelda on
Tuesday, 29th November 2005 @ 08:42:45 PM AEST
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| Thank you for this poem. I Googled my son's name again (like I do every few months) and was surprised to find something from 2003 that I had never seen before. That was a real treat. I posted it on his blog guestbook (I hope you don't mind). The address is: www.wastedpotential.blogspot.com then click the guestbook. My email address is zplinte@hotmail.com. Take care Contralogicus. |
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