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Night
Contributed by
shelby
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Wednesday, 30th January 2008 @ 05:10:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
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A traitor snuck in like a thief in the night.
Sneaking in shadows as the faces of sullen owls watched.
Secrets whispered through the trees though I did not hear.
Could it be everyone knew but me? Yes it is true it is true.
Time moved forward as it always does, inevitable we know.
I, seemingly was stuck in that sobering moment
stuck in the midst of my own quick sand pulling me down.
It grew harder and harder to breathe as the reality of it all sunk deep in my heart.
The wind gently whispered through leaves on the tree’s.
Reminding me of the secrets whispered all around me.
A stir and another, a ripple effect, everyone knew but me but me.
Why do I want to know a truth that sacrifices all I thought to be real?
Sadness engulfed my heart and soul turning me into a lump.
A mass of someone that I dont believe to be me.
Caught in the dark never ending slump.
“of what ifs and whys and what did I do, to deserve this torture and pain?
I as many a beautiful lady, will love with the fullness of our very being.
Not just a part but the entire whole of our worth,
set forth in an empowering, evolving certainty, giving our entire self,
then within a quick second our hearts thrown away upon a shelf.
A burning ember snuffed quickly, just as the traitor stole the existence of all we knew
with such certainty………….
Copyright ©
shelby
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2008-01-30 17:10:44]
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Re: Night
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by NoSaint on
Thursday, 31st January 2008 @ 12:19:37 AM AEST
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eloquent my friend
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Re: Night
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by LoveStruck_Hippie on
Thursday, 31st January 2008 @ 03:55:51 AM AEST
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Beautifully expressed, my dear sweet Michelle
Peace
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Re: Night
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by TheGrimReapersHourglass on
Thursday, 31st January 2008 @ 04:29:19 AM AEST
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| Shadow Stranger-You Come Runnin Back You Come Runnin Back Its True uu-Breath Deep In The Gathering Gloom-hears a cathch a long time ago I called -Message The Bottle-somewhat like-Sting-about a missing and your last part of your poem brought back memories a-SHELF ELF-or -OZZY THE ELF- great poem nice:Night:Comment From The Grim Reaper,DevilsPriest KnownAs LORD,Denver L. Jr. |
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Re: Night
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by emystar on
Monday, 4th February 2008 @ 05:03:13 PM AEST
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Definently a masterpeice.
You are wise beyond your years 'cause you can reach down into the horrors of life and make beautifull poetry.
luv, huggs, smiles, go girlfriend,
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