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Contributed by
UnknownLegend
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Tuesday, 29th January 2008 @ 07:12:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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In lifes torrant ocean 2 life boats are tossed.
2 that have loved 2 that have lost
2 have been taken for all that they gave,
2 that have given for all to be saved
2 that have lived, lusted and cried,
2 that have failed although they have tried
2 souls for the offering 2 lives left to blame,
2 hearts seldom played in loves unfair game
2 have been rescued 2 have been saved
2 will be salvaged from love's lonely grave.
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2008-01-29 07:12:20]
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Re: 2
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by Tweeky on
Tuesday, 29th January 2008 @ 09:10:11 AM AEST
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Love lost can be a painful voyage of self discovery... but when it work's it can be all you want and more .
nice write ,alot of people will relate to this .
take care
Claire
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Re: 2
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by Honey56 on
Wednesday, 30th January 2008 @ 02:09:02 PM AEST
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The real truth if ever been told..
Excellent!!!! |
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Re: 2
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by gummibear199 on
Wednesday, 30th January 2008 @ 05:01:33 PM AEST
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| oh wow i know this feeling. i read it and felt like i was feeling it with you. very nicely written! you pulled me in and i love it! i know how lost love can hurt... i'm dealing with it myself right now! good luck with everything! |
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