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Breathless Moments
Contributed by
SilverRain
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Tuesday, 29th January 2008 @ 02:54:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Your lips on mine does not quite explain it,
but is a good start….
where it builds and grows into an all consuming desire
to explore each other all over…
the start of one breathless moment…
Your eyes and mine….
Does not matter where or when…that’s where we meet.
We both feel with our eyes and where we connect,
Draw closer and loose all sense of everything around us…
In our breathless moments…
Being in your arms…where I am complete….
As our bodies slowly fuse together and become one.
No other feeling or sensation exists but the oneness I am in u….
Breathless..
Copyright ©
SilverRain
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2008-01-29 02:54:22]
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Re: Breathless Moments
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by Oceandreamer on
Tuesday, 29th January 2008 @ 03:26:36 AM AEST
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WOW.... Awesome write!
Well expressed, emotions run deep…
I can relate to your way of writing.
Thanks for sharing.
~~ Oceandreamer ~~
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Re: Breathless Moments
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by GraveTypeBed on
Wednesday, 20th February 2008 @ 12:20:52 AM AEST
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I Could have mistakened this for a journey song, or something... Not a bad thing at all
This is brilliant |
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Re: Breathless Moments
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by alibof10 on
Sunday, 23rd March 2008 @ 05:17:14 AM AEST
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| wow man .. this is deep .. i like it |
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