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This life is ine
Contributed by
bryizzle
on
Tuesday, 29th January 2008 @ 12:10:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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This life is mine
I lay in my bed lost
My soul covered with frost
As I start to shiver
My soul begins to wither
The tears fall down my face
As I try to find my place
In this lonely world
All so cold
I begin to cry
As I start to try
To change my fate
For it’s not too late
The tears begin to fade
As I regret the choices I made
In my dark and gloomy past
I know this depression won’t last
So I begin to see
There is hope for me
As my soul begins to shine
For I am glad this life is mine
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bryizzle
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2008-01-29 00:10:43]
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Re: This life is ine
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by Poetic_Punk on
Tuesday, 29th January 2008 @ 12:22:34 AM AEST
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| not bad, quite a slow meandering poem, well written. good work |
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Re: This life is ine
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by TheGrimReapersHourglass on
Tuesday, 29th January 2008 @ 05:42:19 AM AEST
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| Im So Lonely Because Today I Found My Friends There In My Head-Im So Lonely Im So Lonely Im So Lonely I Could Cry-Did Did Did You See The Frighten Ones And The Pain Lingers On-Great poem:This life is mine: -No You Cant Tak It No You Cant Take It No You Cant Take That Away From Me-Time Its On My Side Yes It Is. |
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Re: This life is ine
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by Honey56 on
Tuesday, 29th January 2008 @ 05:47:14 AM AEST
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I love this write..
God Bless!! |
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