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The Needing
Contributed by
Poetic_Punk
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Monday, 28th January 2008 @ 11:37:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I felt the need coming around again
It grabs my mind and pulls it in
These screams for more are now insane
To pull one back would do me in
I can not let these lines unravel
The hooks that sank deep into my flesh
They are stuck and will give no travel
Surrounded by this Deadly wire mesh
Those who now I can only view
Think not but once of my dying sin
with every passing sniff it grew
I long to join the chain so thin
Now as the need slowly passes me by
I no longer know for what I yearn
Forever closer to being free to fly
I hope this savage urge will one day turn
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Re: The Needing
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by SilverRain on
Tuesday, 29th January 2008 @ 03:02:02 AM AEST
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| Well done with the whole stop smokin thing...extremely inspiring! |
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Re: The Needing
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by TheGrimReapersHourglass on
Tuesday, 29th January 2008 @ 05:24:58 AM AEST
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| Great poem:The Needing: I will do the same just for my future girlfriend the patch works and feels and emotions do enhance with partners without smoking. Comment From The Grim Reaper,DevilsPriest KnownAs LORD,Denver L. Jr -Smokin In The Boys Room-Smokin In The Boys Room- |
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Re: The Needing
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by little_genna on
Tuesday, 29th January 2008 @ 05:49:39 AM AEST
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ive never been addicted to it but i know what you mean just every now and then i crave one..
well done for trying to give up, especially for you new little one...congrats on her as well..
i really liked the way you described your urges, could be related to nearly and addiction... really enjoyed reading..
gen xx |
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Re: The Needing
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by Honey56 on
Tuesday, 29th January 2008 @ 05:54:18 AM AEST
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| Nice post.. |
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Re: The Needing
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by Tweeky on
Tuesday, 29th January 2008 @ 08:53:05 AM AEST
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Nice poem , well done on the quit hun..I know how you feel right now as I too have quit the evil fags lol ..I been off them for 2 weeks nearly an have to say I feel ok at the mo !
good write
gd luck with it & congrats on the birth of your little girl .
Claire
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