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I think you love having this power
Contributed by
sureman
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Monday, 28th January 2008 @ 05:17:54 PM in AEST
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I'm used to playing the part your road kill
your prey
dead and decaying
you being the vulture moving in overhead
I haven't changed but you have
and your abandonment
It's picking me apart piece by piece
If I'm lucky I'll die inside
And gain that apathy that I so envy you for having
And then your savage claws
won't be able to phase me anymore
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2008-01-28 17:17:54]
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Re: I think you love having this power
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by Poetic_Punk on
Tuesday, 29th January 2008 @ 01:05:08 AM AEST
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| not sure wat to make of this one, bit disjointed, but all in all not a bad poem |
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Re: I think you love having this power
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by SilverRain on
Tuesday, 29th January 2008 @ 04:31:44 AM AEST
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| very deep, very moving, excellent. Really enjoyed this. |
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Re: I think you love having this power
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 3rd February 2008 @ 07:37:35 AM AEST
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| This an excellent short poem. keep writing! |
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