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Basic
Contributed by
shelby
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Monday, 28th January 2008 @ 08:28:31 AM in AEST
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To much tongue wagging,
far to many fingers pointing.
How many fingers pointing back?
Blaming and resentment
cause the spirit to lack.
I am done….
Wise people know
when things aren’t working.
It is time to go back
start from the beginning.
Leaving behind that which is lost
looking ahead at all cost.
I am done…
New game starting tomorrow
with the new day at dawn.
Back to the basics is where I belong.
Starting allover with a new idea
searching the soul, listen closer
my message may become clear.
I am done…
It applied to the bowling,
it applies to my life.
It applies to others
I let bring to my journey strife.
Enough is enough
the new game is on
slate wiped clean
I am done
I am done.
shelby
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2008-01-28 08:28:31]
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Re: Basic
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by NoSaint on
Monday, 28th January 2008 @ 08:45:43 AM AEST
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Re: Basic
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by Harmony on
Monday, 28th January 2008 @ 09:48:32 AM AEST
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Life is all games isnt it :) isnt it great :) a life time in day pictures:) supermarvelous down and up but still a picture that fades and becomes insignificant all the bad anyway:D tata and take care :)
Harmony:) |
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Re: Basic
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by UnknownLegend on
Monday, 28th January 2008 @ 10:32:17 AM AEST
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| Society has created a gray area where no one is to blame anymore. It was a lie but, it was only a little white lie. It was only $20 he took , didn't make a difference he killed someone to get it..... or he pointed the gun ....he didn't intend to hurt anyone when he pulled the trigger. Just wanted to scare them .....????? Theres a song by Tracy Chapman "Bang, Bang" about giving a kid a gun whether it be for protection or war ...then when they come back and use it on us we are shocked ....our response ????? Bang, bang, we shoot him down ..then point fingers ...... It affects us all. write on....! |
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Re: Basic
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by spooky on
Monday, 28th January 2008 @ 05:10:41 PM AEST
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i feel the same way,but if it was that simple for me i would,, i have to deal with bull-----
everyday, but still i have a life to live, its part of a perfect plan,,,but written to the point,, a friend in words craig, s, meeks |
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Re: Basic
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 29th January 2008 @ 04:42:09 PM AEST
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Dear, dear, sweet friend,
as Izzie says in the movie FRIED GREEN TOMATOES, "You gotta stop worrying 'bout what others think."
That was my first thought after reading this wise masterpeice.
So just let the tounges way and hold your head up.
the dum **** will take care of itself.
You are a very sensitive, kind, taleted beautifull young lady.
Hang tuff as joy cometh in the morning.
Big luv, huggs, smiles, faith, joy, restoration,
emy |
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