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hopeful
Contributed by
maddie
on
Monday, 28th January 2008 @ 07:39:41 AM in AEST
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I'd rather have you a friend
then not have you at all
I'd rather lie to myself
then pretend not to fall
But when I look in your eyes
and I'm breathing you in
your smile melts my insides
I just cannot win
These emotions unknown
I could never reveal
Cause what if you don't
care how I feel
Winning isn't everything
but this time it's you
Losing means fate
didn't come through
Copyright ©
maddie
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2008-01-28 07:39:41]
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Re: hopeful
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by lost_again on
Monday, 28th January 2008 @ 08:02:44 AM AEST
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the line with breathing you in is so poetic.
Nice write. |
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Re: hopeful
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by shelby on
Monday, 28th January 2008 @ 08:10:42 AM AEST
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I agree with LA statement that line is profound.
Keep hope when all else seems lost, lovely write.
Michelle |
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Re: hopeful
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by emystar on
Monday, 28th January 2008 @ 11:30:44 AM AEST
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A very powerfull, incredible write.
Your words have much meaning and wisdom.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: hopeful
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by crmnlilbruno on
Sunday, 12th April 2009 @ 10:15:44 PM AEST
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| Yet another great write.. Love it.. |
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