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My Always
Contributed by
anonymous1212
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Sunday, 27th January 2008 @ 03:41:33 PM in AEST
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My heart,
It may break,
From this pain it must take,
Im struggeling to see clearly,
Becasue through these tear-filled eyes,
I see her pain and her lies,
Sufficating those that endear me.
How did this become?
Although her bitter words stung,
Shes still flawless in the eyes of my always,
But my always is leaving,
For her mask is misleading,
And her cold glare is suddel yet paining.
And the only thing now,
That keeps my feet on the ground,
Are my memories from when times were better,
Yet my heart is still aching,
From this toll she is taking,
As my always fades to a never....
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2008-01-27 15:41:33]
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Re: My Always
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by Poetic_Punk on
Sunday, 27th January 2008 @ 03:53:44 PM AEST
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| good poem, really good use of language and very emotive, well written |
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Re: My Always
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 20th February 2008 @ 09:26:24 PM AEST
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wow. I stumbled in here by accident, but I am very impressed
with the words I found on the page. There is so much emotion
inside your lines that spill out in poetic blood, covering the soul
of your readers. You've taken a very simple and popular subject
and expressed, with a uniqueness, the ache and yes, "hope" that
surrounds us in moments of loss, discouragement and pain.
Very refreshing and painfully beautiful. I love the use of "my
always". It just fits so perfectly.
~Breezy |
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