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Rainy Day Rainy soul
Contributed by
shelby
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Sunday, 27th January 2008 @ 02:04:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Rain clouds gathered to own the day,
freezing rain came down.
Making life damp, slick and dangerous
here and all around.
I love the rain except for today,
it dampers and hinders the soul.
Knowing truth sometimes begets
the nature in which you already know.
Where does one draw a line,
decide that enough is enough?
Concluding it is just what it is
throw hands in the air and simply give up.
Some say it is a matter of "time"
this time the time has ran out.
Like the rain struggling to find its place
now a frozen ice cycle no doubt.
Copyright ©
shelby
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2008-01-27 14:04:28]
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Re: Rainy Day Rainy soul
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by Crow on
Sunday, 27th January 2008 @ 03:34:21 PM AEST
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awe..hey I`m here to lift you up just a bit"
hell if it turns to ice we`ll skate! ..Hi hon been some time i`ve been on, hope all is good with you..love ya, Vincent |
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Re: Rainy Day Rainy soul
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by reprobate on
Sunday, 27th January 2008 @ 05:49:31 PM AEST
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I liked it very much! I like anything along these lines.
But like everyone says, don't give up.
thanks for sharing... |
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Re: Rainy Day Rainy soul
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by Poetic_Punk on
Monday, 28th January 2008 @ 12:12:30 AM AEST
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great poem, well worded, flows nicley and an enjoyable read.
remember tho, there is always sunshine after rain because it cant rain forever |
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Re: Rainy Day Rainy soul
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by NoSaint on
Monday, 28th January 2008 @ 02:59:56 AM AEST
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| well written my friend....I am sending warm sunshine your way....just sit back a moment take a few deep breathes and feel it chase away those clouds.... |
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