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Missing
Contributed by
jennihi123
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Sunday, 27th January 2008 @ 10:19:21 AM in AEST
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Missing
I feel a deep despair rising from within me
I want to get away from it all, I want to be free
I hate this feeling of being so unbelievably down
I want to get rid of this all consuming frown
Maybe I could find a way
Maybe I could keep these feelings at bay
Maybe I could disperse this fear
Maybe I could just disappear
What if I didn't come back?
What if I didn't need to pack?
What if I ended it once and for all?
What if I didn't have the bottle?
Would anyone actually care?
Would anyone notice I wasn't there?
Would anyone miss me?
Well.... let's see
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jennihi123
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2008-01-27 10:19:21]
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Re: Missing
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by freemysoul13 on
Sunday, 27th January 2008 @ 11:12:43 AM AEST
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Re: Missing
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by Honey56 on
Sunday, 27th January 2008 @ 12:00:26 PM AEST
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There is lots of people would care if your were missing, question is will you care?
I would not put pain on my family...
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Re: Missing
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by Tweeky on
Sunday, 27th January 2008 @ 12:04:32 PM AEST
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Alot of people feel like this ..an the answer is.. yes alot of people would care .
Good writing . Take care.
Claire
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