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Upon Leaving

Contributed by anonymous1212 on Sunday, 27th January 2008 @ 09:27:53 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



Words in my head while I am unable to write,
Dreams Im unable to achieve,
I clench my fists as Im thinking in spite,
That these are my thoughts upon leaving.

Losing myself,
As they struggle to become one,
Morals being lost in a fight,
My place fading,
As thsoe willed become stronger,
Batteling not to lose my mite.

How we have gotten to this place,
Throught the mind and hands of one,
Aspirations put to disgrace,
Attempts continue to weaken.

Slowly we seem to bend,
Much too close to breaking,
Tears form behind tired eyes,
No regrets on the love she is taking.

Falling so deep,
From a bond meant to keep,
Scared beyound belief what I am losing.
Although he is blind,
There is still hope,
He will recognize the hell that hes choosing.

A voice continues to fade into the distance,
Telling me to saty strong,
This voice is swept away,
By the yelling and screams,
Ears refusing to listen.

As one looks into the mirror,
Wrongs never show clearer,
Ties severed without consent,
he wears a disguise,
And gives into her lies,
Denying the help that hes been sent.

Every lie,
Every glance,
Hope is slowly losing its chance,
All the words and the names,
Every childish game,
Explained with one "Nobodys Perfect."

The low that has become,
From the battles that shes won,
My own pain,
All caught in one tear.

I have cried,
I have hoped,
But im nearing the end of my rope,
With thsi disaster thats unrolled before me,
And Im tired and im worn down by the Denial that comes,
And the desperate attempts to ignore me.

Words in my head while I am unable to write,
Dreams Im unable to achieve,
I clench my fists as Im thinking in spite,
That these are my thoughts upon leaving.







Copyright © anonymous1212 ... [ 2008-01-27 09:27:53]
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Re: Upon Leaving (User Rating: 1 )
by Honey56 on Sunday, 27th January 2008 @ 09:59:23 AM AEST
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This is truly a beautiful write..I love it & enjoyed reading it.

God Bless & Stay Strong


Re: Upon Leaving (User Rating: 1 )
by Poetic_Punk on Sunday, 27th January 2008 @ 02:15:43 PM AEST
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Great poem, flows ok and conveys a lot of feeling and passion, greatly writen




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