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The Shadow Of Day
Contributed by
Poetic_punk
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Sunday, 27th January 2008 @ 03:03:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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In the early hours of the morn I find no block on my flying soul
As words flow out, meanings sprout and tiredness shows no tole
For on this day my heart doth play with threads so long and gold
While time goes by, no truth must die as I let the day unfold
This is where we shed no tear for seconds past and past away
For on this morn, such a shinig dawn we whitness in its stay
And now I float on a tired boat as waves wash the sleepy shaw
now the day is on its way and the morning opens up its doors
This is the shadow of day.
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2008-01-27 03:03:52]
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Re: The Shadow Of Day
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by Tweeky on
Sunday, 27th January 2008 @ 11:56:05 AM AEST
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I like this as it rain's true for me ...I find when I go to bed all I think about is word's and they always seem to fit together but I never have a pen to hand . When I write poems at night ..I could stay awake ...as the words just seem to flow . I find it harder through the day for some reason. A good write my friend.;o)
Claire
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Re: The Shadow Of Day
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by anonymous1212 on
Sunday, 27th January 2008 @ 03:28:57 PM AEST
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| i really enjoy reading your poetry. Im pretty new at this and i love your style and hope my poems will be able to flow as well as yours with time. Awesome write =D |
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Re: The Shadow Of Day
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by brew on
Monday, 28th January 2008 @ 07:17:34 AM AEST
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Cool title, and liked the flowing stanza you created....I wished I could be a nite owl at times, yet Im opposite, bc of work...go me..lol Oh well.
cheers,
brew~ |
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