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Song in the key of — Gee!
Contributed by
spike
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Saturday, 26th January 2008 @ 03:57:16 PM in AEST
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So many wondrous moments
mixed within the dross;
that blow away the dust to
show evanescing gloss
Holy mackerel sights,
epiphanies of the soul;
makes you glad to be alive,
to witness it at all
Amazing life behaviour,
celestial displays;
panoramic nature
to treasure all your days
first gaze from the newborn
or a poem made complete;
friendships born of happenstance
—life is just replete
I do so love
those wow moments,
when songs in the key of — Gee!
just overwhelm me.
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spike
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2008-01-26 15:57:16]
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Re: Song in the key of — Gee!
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by emystar on
Saturday, 26th January 2008 @ 04:08:15 PM AEST
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Beautifull work, my friend. Awesome graphics.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Song in the key of — Gee!
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by high_on_duct_tape on
Saturday, 26th January 2008 @ 07:13:12 PM AEST
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| Not bad, but somewhat un-pointed. It seems without an incredible amount of meaning. A "wow" moment should be more emphasized by contrast or by desperate appreciation (or some other means). Again, pretty good. |
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Re: Song in the key of — Gee!
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by Poetic_Punk on
Sunday, 27th January 2008 @ 01:14:30 AM AEST
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| not a bad poem, but i have to agree with the early comment, it some what unpointed and therefore lacks the pasion you would expect from a wow moment, lacking in feeling somewhat, all in all a good poem tho |
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Re: Song in the key of — Gee!
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by brew on
Sunday, 27th January 2008 @ 11:12:49 AM AEST
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A wow moment, is what is felt and known by the one who has it
Loved your pic
and may i add to a wow moment
The ocean and the crashing of the waves, and nothing...else.now thats WOW
brew~ aka Dayna |
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