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Mental Maneuvers
Contributed by
Rakerman1999
on
Friday, 25th January 2008 @ 08:32:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Heaven has stranded me
here in insanity.
Leave
the poor fool
on the brink.
Dreams? Or reality?
Just a legality.
Who'll
be the first
one to blink?
Slipping and sliding
while blindly abiding
those
chaotic whims
of the mind,
Mental maneuvers
by shakers and movers,
Who knows
what the seekers
might find?
Copyright ©
Rakerman1999
... [
2008-01-25 08:32:05]
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Re: Mental Maneuvers
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by emystar on
Saturday, 26th January 2008 @ 02:29:29 PM AEST
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Goo work, my friend.
I hate mind games.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Mental Maneuvers
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by ever1der on
Saturday, 20th September 2008 @ 10:33:16 AM AEST
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I like the rhyme scheme a lot; and your use of words.
"Dreams? Or reality?
Just a legality.
Who'll
be the first
one to blink?" This is a very clever line ... |
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Re: Mental Maneuvers
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by ChenoaShiningwater on
Friday, 28th August 2009 @ 04:46:13 AM AEST
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yeah being head screwed is crappy BUT...it makes for a BRILLIANT write *smiles*
(((hugs))) |
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